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Good-Bye |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Gently lay me in Oblivion, shower tomorrow's memories with Our kisses & remember how my Desire kept constant vigil over this flame Believe what used to be, what is You remain in me for- Ever... Sunkissed. [This message has been edited by Sunkissed (03-01-2003 04:11 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
*sighs as well* Mmmm....beautiful. That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful and just perfect for the book. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is such a beautiful goodbye, sweet friend, this made me cry to feel your heart bleeding out here, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful!!! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's a nice way to remember~ Very! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sun - Im right there with you - xxoo beautiful and heartwrenching - know that pain well |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
It seems like every poem is bringing me down tonight. There all so great. Love bites me in the butt everytime. Why? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
May the book be wrapped in this ache. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful *s M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But...of course...  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
another beautiful poem! learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunkissed - like the words of this... BC |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Definitely gorgeous... ohhh  does anyone have a kleenex? Really, I just love it. So expressive. |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Yes, really beautiful. Warm greetings, Etain. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Just beautiful. *S* |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is lovely!  Liz I've waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A beautifully written farewell... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a sweet reminder........ |
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