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Last Dance
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Last Dance |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL 
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~ Last Dance ~ Im sorry is all she could say, couldn't even look at me that day. I looked at her stairing down at the ground, not a snigle frown could be found. She raised her head and said im sorry it has to be this way... What happend to all the promises that you gave, where you wold be with me until my dying day. The ones where you said you would hold my hand, and be my number one biggest fan. She raised her head and said im sorry it has to be this way... Walking, talking doing your thing, I'm just wishing you would be with me. I saw her sitting over there giving me that stare, she got up, smiled and as she passed right by me. She raised her head and said im sorry it has to be this way... Come on and take a chance, just one more dance around town. I promise I'll have you back, back by ten or close to then. I'll have you back by ten or close to then. All I'm asking is for one more dance, just take a chance....with me. A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, [This message has been edited by sellout007 (03-01-2003 05:12 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of a song...great stuff! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Thanks guys, glad you liked it O) A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I hope she takes a chance with one last dance....ENJOYED!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dan - always moving - this IS a song . . . nice job here - xxoo |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Thanks for the words! Justbleu - We did take a chance, unfortunetly it didnt last to long!~ o) littlewing - Actually, most of my stuff starts out as a song. And then i try and edit it for the posting board! Im glad you liked it!! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This was nice and romantic. I liked... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thanks for the poetry in motion! Warm springtime hugs, Earth Angel |
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