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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Recovering (cinquain) Happy or something like, getting ok, normal. But the past, like an evil clown, stalking. [This message has been edited by Ratleader (03-01-2003 02:00 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sleepless Eyes needing rest Head pounding out the ache Body wishing nighttime's passing Dreamless *s may as well write if I can't sleep Always love a cinquain |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
That poem reminds me of my friend who is afraid of clowns. We took him to a haunted house last year and they had clowns there, he almost pissed his pants. The best part is that he's 22. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 thinking...thinking...too much thinking... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...must be why they call it recovery and not recovered.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I was talking to a friend a couple days ago, about a bad time I went through back in the when, and how after a decade and a half, I still have little rocks in my heart from it. Later this little poem just sort-of popped outta' me. One of the rocks, maybe, who knows.... nakedthoughts, you are an absolute natural with these little things -- I love that one! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ Stones-in-turn are sometimes a good thing, reminding us (at least me) that things thought buried are excavated for a purpose~ I greatly enjoyed the cinquain formatting for these thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your pebble has companions... I know this stalking. *S* Excellent write, my friend. *S* |
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