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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-02-28 11:43 PM

In the thoughts riding
The waves of time
Dreams carrying breezes
Of meditative release
An imprisoned soul is captured
In the shell of a mental picture
Carrying the burden of creativity

A canvas so inspiring
The poet’s words will
Paint the masterpiece
Of an exquisite beauty
Stokes blossoming forever
Within your mind
A texture of soft caresses
Of an spirited imagination

So in an unbridled dance of purity
Suspended in the virgin freshness
Of the fragrance of your aberration
Soothing the senses in total intoxication
As the mind melts into its words
To sing its song from the heart

From winds floating from the manifestation
Reaching into the heaven of desires
Capturing the angelic innocence
In words making love in your presence
Cuddling every part of individuality
In static touches thundering in endless needs
Storming in a new vocabulary of infinite images

The vision of you lying next to a fantasy
May be too much to bare
For you will surely be aroused
To desires climaxing to new heights
Creating words so special
That they reinvent the image of you
In the thoughts riding
The waves of time

Note: I painted this picture as if a man was in front of a fairy goddess. So sensuously delicious she is, that her notes created the music inside the heart, finding the inner peace to devour her in gentle caresses, hitting the right nerves to hold her just that special.

D.Lester Young 2/28/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

1 posted 2003-02-28 11:51 PM

I don not know where to begin. This poem is beyond me. It is simply amazing and awe inspiring. i look forward to reading more of your work.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2003-03-01 12:40 PM

This is another splendid poem. I've never read anything from you that wasn't wonderfully written and so vividly painted. Your words create mental pictures.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-01-2003 12:40 AM).]

Amara
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.

3 posted 2003-03-01 01:16 AM

Very beautiful imagery, and an overall wonderful poem! Thanks for the pretty picture to send me to sleep with!

That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-03-01 04:26 AM

beautiful write

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-03-01 10:54 AM

You painted a beautiful, beautiful picture.
Eric

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-03-01 02:40 PM

(sigh) Oh David, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry because I always have dreams of this kind of love and how I long to be in loves arms and make these fantasies seem real! (big hugggssssss) This is a paradise of a poem, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-01 02:43 PM

You certainly did do an excellent painting with your words. Simply beautiful...

Hugs,
Ethel

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