Open Poetry #25 |
Worrying |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I sit here At this late hour Worrying about my parents They haven't called all day And they said yesterday They would call me today I worry Because they are in snow country Up in Pennsylvania How do I they didn't Get into a wreck I wish they would call So my worry Would be laid to rest But it is after 11 PM And they are probably gonna Come home and go stright to bed When I get up in the morning They are gonna get a call I want to hear their voices To see if they are still alive Cold hands means a warm heart |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Good poem, usually it's flipped around and the parents are worrying about their kids. I'm sure everything will be o.k. This just shows that they have a child who cares. |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
nice one mate this one truly touched me because my parents have split up recently and i worry about them alot there always on the phone yelling at each other, |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
You won't have to worry about me Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that hurts, yea, I know... |
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