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Lost Love |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. 
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A cup of coffee grows cold. Time passes both slowly and quickly As I sit thinking of days old. What will I miss when it all does end? Will the pain and hurt be there still When my heart does finally mend? Can I still see the flowers bloom? Will there still be the birds to sing? In my heart, will there still be room? People keep telling me the pain will pass. They mean well and maybe speak the truth. Life seems to go on but the sorrow will always last. (this isnt my work it's someone elses work from my old school they were very talented with poetry) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Things like this take time to pass. But eventually it does. I really liked this piece. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
thank you =) wow the people here are so warm and welcoming, I thought because of my age everyone would just ignore me but you lot proved me wrong =) |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Very good poem. Is the person that wrote this the same age as you. They seem to have a lot of understanding for someone that young. The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another. |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
No she was 17 and worked as a special needs helper in my class and we both loved poetry so we shared some with each other and she gave us a copy of that one |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know about cold coffee |
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