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I Could, Now?
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I Could, Now? |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
I Could, Now? I can look but I can not touch. Take the fire iron from the flame and burn my sight for evermore. Scorch my eyes and burn to oblivion my power to see your enticing face. Construct a wall around your allurement to block my prying eyes and hinder my altruism. Squirrel your paragon around every blind turn and when you feel my being, prematurely make your withdrawl. I can not look I can not touch I will forever feel. The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very powerful. The imagery superb. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Thanks. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Hello James, This is a wonderful first post and I hope to read more of your work. I do welcome you to Passions In Poetry and I hope that you enjoy yourself here. Hugs, Ethel...garysgirl |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
thanyou very much |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very powerful and thought provoking first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
thanks nancy |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to passions...h |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Welcome to Passions. Enjoyed your first post.  Sunkissed."I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, rk. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
James, I love your first post ..I can Feel what you're saying. Welcome to these Blue Pages, glad to have you here! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
James, Welcome to Passions. I love this poem. It must be read multiple times. Each time, it sinks right into my essence and you've managed to say how I didn't know how I felt. Look forward to reading more of your work. Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Yes, we must feel for if we can feel so much can open before us and you can easily be felt for, God Bless You, this is a wonderful debut, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet James, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Welcome To Passions!!! Nice first post!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks to James for finding this, I had missed your first post, rkcraig. Intense, and the imagery scorches. Is it too late to still say welcome?  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very nice rhythm and your feelings are powerfully expressed. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed welcome to passions |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - Welcome to PIP ! Sorry I am late - dont know how I missed this - is amazing - and this: I will forever feel. is lovely in itself - very nice entrance xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
your quote at the bottom was an especially powerful statement - welcome to pip |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
rkcraig...emotive and vivid writing...welcome to Passions! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You could also let it happen, you know....as safe as walls and mazes keep you, they isolate to the same degree...... A most delectable first post. Welcome aboard! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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