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State of Lucidity |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Candle dancing flame enhancing bright as the sun I opened my eyes to a new sunrise Surprise! Before me lie kisses from Heaven frozen in time perfect and serene lying in rhyme about me spread across my bed petals the hue of red I stirred - ssshhhhh . . . s-l-o-w-l-y I opened one palm of my shaking hand and smiled . . . A Kiss from Heaven [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-31-2003 04:53 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
So pretty. And yes....Lucid...Serene. That new dawn. |
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Pascal Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 54Ontario, Canada |
I love the line "A Kiss from Heaven" - so beautiful. Well done, very well done! Pascal  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I'm a dyed in the wool morning person, and that moment of opening my eyes to sunlight is almost as enchanting as your poem. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed - thank you - this one mean a lot to me - a new dawn - yes . . . Pascal - thank you so much Ken - me too - thank you Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-31-2003 07:40 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You write with such of beauty. Every one. Thank you. Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How perfectly beautiful this is!! Lovely...much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue... You only seem to get better with each write. ************************************** s-l-o-w-l-y I opened one palm of my shaking hand and smiled ************************************** Very descriptive. I like the way this brought the poem to an almost screeching crawl... Outstanding job as usual. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous love poems always make me smile as may your heart always sing with loves joy! (big hugggsssssss) This is heavenly, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-31-2003 09:23 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful vision , dreamlike lying on a bed of rosepetals, why ever leave? make it a brass bed, thats even better [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-31-2003 09:47 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beats the regular morning routine don't it? Grin You know I love this [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-31-2003 09:43 PM).] |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
quite visual...love it :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - candle dancing, wonder what that would be like... And a kiss from heaven, my oh my... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - no THANK YOU truly . . . Nancy - how very sweet you are . . . Brad - you are much to good to me truly - thank you (I liked that line too) NOAH - your words always make me smile TY so much Michele - hahaha yes that IS a nice vision . . . TY Raph - yes - I do know sweety . . .xxoo Kristie - hehehe thank you Bill - lmao - hehehe - thank you so much Thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
ahhh - I love the sunrise - that warm kiss of the sun gently waking you & hopefully your lover, snuggling candles waning taste of heaven Thats what came to mind when I read this. thankyou for sharing this beautiful write littlewing - I enjoy your writing & look forward to more [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-03-2003 09:50 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
TY dream - too kind to me truly . . . xxoo |
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