Open Poetry #25 |
Heart And Soul |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I gave you my love Tonight The stars are seems To be on their way They say Love is written On the stars When you wish upon them So here Iam Giving all I can Wishing the leaves would stay dry Let me try To give my heart Tonight Now aumtumn Is gone Winter Is here To fill your love In my heart The leaves were fallen On the ground Let the words of whispers calling I gave you my heart and soul Tonight The candlelight glowing Where all the roses dyning When the time is here for me to give my heart and soul Tonight Let us pray for tonight When love is here Tonight I gave you my heart and soul [This message has been edited by vandana (03-01-2003 10:28 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Let the words of whispers calling ~lovely vandana~ I hope he hears this~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Vandana, this is such a beutiful love call. I hope he hears your hearts whisper, too. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic writing! loved this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Vandana, this is a beautiful calling, sweet friend, may love always heed your call and embrace you with smiles and faith! (big huggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
vandana one of your best...enjoyed...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A pretty write my friend. ThisDiamond |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
I believe that this is the first poem that I have read of yours; I will look forward to many more. |
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