Open Poetry #25 |
Climbing Up the Walls |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i wonder if they feel it, i 'd like to think they do, somehow, as i do, at least intuitively, one would think, they, being the ones out there day to day, on the frontlines, experiencing life, firsthand, soon imitated by art, inspiration, as time unfolds, some watch from cold steel poles, or building rooftops, eating seeds, stuck in winter, not having flown off, some stand there, lifeless almost, hanging arms of kicked off shoes and coats, on the warmer winter days, appearing so complacent, as if nothing is going on, will they feel life begin again, as its precious gift is bestowed upon them, dressed in pretty pinks , or other shades of the season, those that parade on shoreline rocks, or take to the open sky, on a whim passing by, do they realize the metamorphasis about to occur, as i do, does passion run through their roots, as desire runs through my veins, craving something new, climbing walls until, sensing change, feeling movement, creativity breaking thru, so much going on inside, despite, this plight of what is........... [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-01-2003 03:34 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I loved this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
does passion run through their roots, as desire runs through my veins, great lines... I enjoy your take on life. M |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wow Michele does it again.....it must be so hard to be so talented..... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You make the reader feel the ever present change of seasons and in temperature. despite what is! Nice touch Michele~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - another one from you well written... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you're on a tear don't stop |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, this is really good. You always describe the scene so well. Good writin... Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! what a write! hit home for me... |
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