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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I shall not disturb the fountain that pools ever silently swirling still in the garden of thought to run in current cycles floating ripples out of time to clock shutting the handle off to turn on it's own filtering sweet sorrows that were mist in the meantime caught adrift left to strain through a sieve to rise again bathed and cleansed from tepid waterfalls gleaming in the sun to spill as it will and should be flowing freely~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
something that a little "Mr Plumber" couldn't fix? A pretty write, Bluesy Ed |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Grinning at ED's comment... always a pretty write! Enjoyed the images of thoughts flowing in a fountain. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds light and airy, like daydreaming on a spring day |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
to spill as it will and should be flowing freely~ beautiful lines but then they all are |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you kindly Julie~ Roto rooter never did the job for me... thanks for the pretty wranxy, and all that too. Thank you for sharing your smile with me TD~ I think I'll be a plumber in my next life! I am so over daydreaming... My cup runneth over and ran dry a long time ago, been there done that! Thanks for reading Michele my bell. Raph~ Thank you always for your thoughtful replies...Please know I appreciate them and that I never take them for granted. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the beginning...and the ending...very nice imagery...good to read you |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, whether you write of sad or happy, they're all good when you write them..... Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
indeed...it flows like the water..always seeking gravities pull... enjoyed Bluesy one... enjoyed a great deal. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yes, some cycles are meant to be broken but when the water is moving smoothly and is being purified in the process, it is always best to let the sorrows be cleansed into new hopes and strength in your heart, otherwise you may not know what you're missing! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
...and a perfect title, too hugsssss M |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Nice sense of linking images. Glad I found you. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lori, So glad to see you posting. I always know it will be something unique. This is no exception. Liked the images, fountain in garden of thought. This seems like acceptance and surrender and let nature take its course to a place of cleansing and renewal... written so eloquently.. Just lovely, enjoyed, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very beautifully done... regards, sudhir |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori--Very peaceful and serene poem...flowing from the heart.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for stopping in Dixie~ hugs to you~ You are one of passions sweetest hearts. Thank you Ethel~ It's not easy to rock steady in the midst of all the push and pull going on... (but I try) Thanks Ron~Noah~ Free flowing might be slow going but it's the natural process that gives meaning to the shape of things to come. Thank you always Noah~ I thought of you when I came up with that title. Glad you noticed! Hugs Maur~ I'm glad you did too, thank you Kayjay~ Always the perceptive one. How do you manage to hit the mark every time? Thank you for your warm heart. Hugs pat~ It's good to see you here, thank you Sudhir~ It is true, my inspiration comes from the heart of the matter, although it tends to overflow now and then. Thank you so much Martie. Hi vandana~ I'm glad you enjoyed, and thanks. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-28-2003 03:45 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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