Open Poetry #25 |
To Call Forth The Stars |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The night spreads to a blanket of stars and moonlight. We lie on our backs in devotion to the sky. All is quiet in this temple. Opening your hands...you reach into the night - as if to call forth something greater than ourselves. And the grace of this simple gesture - punctuates a silence deeper than we both can know. And into this void...we cast our prayers. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I just love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Magical moments are those we can call holy, and lovers know where that temple of holy moments is, you know too. I love this! Love, Etain. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ericc~ Write the stars and you capture my attention~ 'the grace of this simple gesture - punctuates a silence deeper than we both can know' Remarkably beautiful thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..you captured a moment...and got my attention as well.. enjoyed this.... nice work... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
.... pure magic ...."in devotion to the sky", you create a beautiful atmosphere. Very very enjoyable. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enchanting...simply beautiful!! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Sweet, magical, ethereal, beautiful... how gentle and profound. Thank you for such a divine whisper... truly divine. Love, Moca |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, may all your prayers and wishes come true and may the stars you wish upon merge together into a supernova that never explodes, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
heavenly!!!!! |
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