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Slipper And A Promise ( Duet with Martie)
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Slipper And A Promise ( Duet with Martie) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I’m Ready to try It rained all night a lullaby Of drips and creaks of winding breeze That wet leaf pillows Left from Fall’s piles and now Are brown faded in corners with a few To cover drain The patio a lake remains So cat has learned to walk on water And I, have decided to try harder In search for green and growing spring of things Into the day of slippers and a promise Begin the setting aside of empty pots Dormant long with winter thoughts And tending first to drape of linen on wire I’ll air the dust staled seals of acquire When sun again trips this cloud drenched sky And cat, and I Find the pools of season, dry. [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (02-27-2003 12:46 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Yay!!! Oh Ron and Martie, this is breathtaking, sweet friends, and just along the corner there will always be something green growing fresh and the rain will wash away into the soil where the bulbs of tomorrow will bloom soon enough! (big hugggssssss) I just love this, sweet friends, I would love to write a duet too with eitehr of you sometimes, BRAVO, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Martie and Ron, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
BRAVO! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am moth giddy..  two of my fave free verse poets setting my mothy mind afire with all this imagery... I got moth tingles I tell ya!!  Du-et to me again hehehe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you, Ron..for the pleasure of dueting with you! and thanks Noah, Dixie and Janet Marie for your replies. Can warming replies stop the rain?  to all! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'm in too strange a mood to respond to this seriously right now. But I read it, it's honestly an incredible poem. I'll try to remember to come back when I figure out which side of my brain is which. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I echo JM on this...swooonderful! Much enjoyed....du-et again soon please? ~Hugs to you both~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I so enjoy good duets.... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Wow, you two. A pleasure to read. Just about every line either so packed with imagery could almost be a poem by itself, or adds to the overall message, causing me to be eager to read the next line. Love this. Hard to deciphor where one of you start and stops and the other begins and adds to..... Amazing....and enjoyed greatly. Hugs to you both, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Congratulations to both of you for this charming duet. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
lovely imagery, you too! Core |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I knew I was in for a treat when I saw the names. *S* Excellent work, you two! *S* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh my... methinks I'm jealous...pout. I never got to duet with Martie...whine.... This was like a present. Thank you, you two. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity...I know how to cure that....  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Amaizing! wow. uh... wow. the Wind is invisible. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now will you look at your two just sqeezing a picture out of every single word. Yes, this is a duet that was meant to be and be often. Do I have to tell you how much I enjoyed this? I don't think I do , you two are just the best! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Capt. Ron and sweet Martie....what a beautiful duet by two beautiful people. The words you two weaved together were absolutely beautiful..... Do we get to see another one real soon?? Please?? Heart Hugs to you both, Ethel |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you two doit wonderfully and I loved your duet - thanks - Paul |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I'm glad someone bumped this up again. Beautiful write between two awesome poets! Sunkissed."I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I knew this was going to be a great one! You two write wonderfully together Two of Passions BEST! THank you for the treat Liz |
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