Open Poetry #25 |
On The Wind |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
If the words fell From lips other than mine And you caught them on the wind I'd hope for you sunshine And long gentle days Of happiness spent with him |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cap'n... this is about as short... and as tenderly sweet, as I have seen you write... ever... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Not one word wasted Captain.. Perfectly penned and very much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Capt. Ron, now that is what "Love" really is...to love someone else more than self... . . Hugs, Ethel |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
sometimes the fewest amount of words speak the loudest :-) Bravo! HUGGLES KS |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Ron, this is such a wonderful pledge, sweet friend, I too desire just the same as I want to wrap the words in cashmere smiles and faith for my loved ones! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
It's a true act of love to wish happiness to someone who has found love with another...poignant words Ron.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron...The feelings touched on in this, stated so simply, have much impact. Well done! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, I understand this and wrote one at Christmastime, similar in message, admittedly, I fibbed a tiny bit...but, for the most part, meant it. This is the highest form of love. Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (02-27-2003 01:19 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If the words fell From lips other than mine And you caught them on the wind ======================================== *SIGH* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
from a heart of truly profound love, though lips are mute to speak their truth heart-wrenching I wish you love Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And as long as 'him' refers to her dog, I agree! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the mark of a man who loves a woman |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is very sweet, Capitan. Your moods they are a-swinging, poetically speaking! Core |
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