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In the Cold Hard
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In the Cold Hard |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In the Cold Hard Bittersweet the day, snow touched, freeze burned, the ground prepared for you. A day for a resting, the secrets left untold, buried deep within your mind, in the cold hard. An unveiling of feelings, teared in silence swallowing up the whole of you, laying to rest, the darkness that drowned the memories of a small child once in your hold. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Too moody but good write. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Dark indeed... and very well written...  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice poem, Maureen! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Sy, this was a poem about being buried today...a funeral. Although the sermon was one of warmth, I don't believe in this snow covered area, that I could have written it in and of a good mood. Thanks.  M Nan, thank you. I don't do dark too well...but some days the light doesn't shine. Sue, thank you. It's been a busy few days. I will catch up with you later hugs M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-27-2003 05:54 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some days, the light does not shine indeed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks Dixie *s |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~M~ Some of us have come to expect your writing to be about your love life, and we look for the symbols of such. Good to see you writing of current, other events happening. Perhaps you have and I've missed them. Hard to read everyone's poems. You are skilled enough that the layering is there...Had you not mentioned it in your replies, I could have come up with many concepts of this poem, none relating to a funeral. I think that the sign of good writing, indeed. Thank you for sharing your poetry here. I enjoy it. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I really don't write abut my love life...I have none...I just write about feelings and let the reader assume whatever  hugss and thank you M |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Excellent word usage here, Maureen. The title is perfect, also. Sandra |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
This is only my second day of being a member, but all of your work that I have read so far, I deeply enjoy. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sandra, I always wonder how they can dig the plot in such frozen ground. It sure was cold and windy... rk, I am happy that you enjoy my words. Thank you. Vandana, always a pleasure to see you here. *s M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
An unveiling of feelings, teared in silence That's a lovely way to put it Maureen~ Hugs you~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-06-2003 08:51 PM).] |
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