Open Poetry #25 |
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Colors of Love (repost ) |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise ![]() |
Prisms of Color Soft white wispy mist floating in the treetops Lit by the dawning of a pink morning sun tingeing still dark gray clouds. Warm bluish misty air, drifting over verdant mountains Like your whisper on my cheek. The deep blue of a clear, crisp sky Snow white puffy clouds Parading in random file on a slow breeze Throwing cool shadows on newly cut bright green grass. Like the peace you give me. Flickering yellows Itinerant white/yellow/red sparks Off rough logs over curling blue flames And glowing, golden embers warming the room. Like the comfort of you. Pulsating deep reds shot with Exploding purples/blues/greens Ejecting day-glow pinks and light yellows Like our passion. Flat, slate gray clouds low to the horizon With a fine, cold drizzle driven onto barren ground On a raw, relentless, black wind. Like your absence A rainbow fronting roiling storm clouds Brilliant, highlighted with no end. Myriads of colors Blending Like our love. Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (02-27-2003 03:11 AM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love the way you paint a picture with all the beautiful colors... ![]() |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Cheryl, Glad to see this is to be included in book. This is beautiful. I especially liked the flickering yellow stanza, though all are well written; good imagery. Enjoyed this greatly, Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Cheryl, this is sooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love rainbows and you blend it with the magic of romance like a true sorceress! (kiss on cheek) You have my vote, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Awesome poem, I really enjoyed your colorful expressions. ![]() Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Another diamond in the ruff. I loved it. ![]() Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such a colorful piece deserves to be read... ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed your read ![]() |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is beautiful Cher, it gets my vote and a ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You brought the color palette to life! Nice...very nice! *s |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow..you got them all!! Lovely imagery in a cool poem. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is superbly supreme! I loved it the first time around and I love it this time as well! Simply gorgeous pictures you paint with your words and the tender loving sentiments you convey are so touching. A delightful poetic piece of writing! Yep! I really do love it! ![]() Warm Irish hugs, Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
oh my, this is so lovely and filled with color. I'm pushing it up for another go round. ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I thought I'd responded to this already... but certainly enjoyed the revisit. *S* This is just beautiful! *S* |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Boy I sure do appreciate all of you and the wonderful support that this did receive. I am once again battling a health crisis and find it so impossible to write anything worth posting ( I am still painting , however)....I do so love and appreciate all of you ![]() Poetry is: |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Enjoyed the read very much ![]() Charisma |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This poem is definitely "passion, imagination and intellect running together"! I love your use of colors. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nicely done |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
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