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On Snowy Night
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On Snowy Night |
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That Voice Junior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 34 |
Listen to the building snow Piling up, flake on flake, Come sit, you’ve got no where to go, Together, voice to voice We can learn what the other knows As outside the winter blows Here inside we’ll sit by the fire And let the conversation flow Learning about our desires. Watch the flames die down They now burn, lower and lower With their soft crackling sound And our eyes, lower and lower Bring us to quiet and sleep The words will keep Till morning light grows. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions!!!!! This is a beautiful piece to start with. I'll be looking for more of your work. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Very nicely penned first post! I shall be watching for more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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That Voice Junior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 34 |
Your very kind and warm welcome Is most appreciated on this snowy night I hope my poetry is up to the standards of this place |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I could feel the afterglow and the whispers sounding in this scintillating debut, yay, this is sooooooo romantic, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome To Passions In Poetry. I thoroughly enjoyed your first post, and look forward to reading more. I hope that you enjoy it here.....  Ethel....garysgirl... [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-15-2003 10:46 PM).] |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Wonderful start here at Passions!!! I'm sure you're going to love it here...It's hard not to!!! I'm new here myself but these people are absolutely wonderful. I am so proud to be a part of this place!!!  !!!!!!!!!Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!! P.S. Love your nick  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Welcome to Passions! Your debut was quite full of remarkable pastoral imagery and I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting). -majnu -------------------------------------- Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet. [This message has been edited by majnu (02-16-2003 07:10 PM).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I enjoyed your first post...I have snow due here tomorrow they say...hmmmm...I hope  welcome |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very soft and feeling good |
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That Voice Junior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 34 |
I would like to thank you all for such kind and cheery responses to my attempt at poetry |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, That Voice. I'm going to enjoy watching your future attempts, because I have a feeling, you truly write from the heart... Karilea |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Enjoyed the softness in this write. ThisDiamond |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Welcome to Passions. An excellent offering. I too look forward to reading more of your work. INclan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
That Voice--peaceful easy feeling to this...much enjoyed. Welcome to Passions! |
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