Open Poetry #25 |
Banquet |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Banquet you are a feast for the mind do pardon my manners as I lick my fingers "Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a concept! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
suI like htis one. Slyly sensual |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
hmmmm |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
mmmmmmmm tasty! love this ! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful and sensual. Eric |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Whoa!!! I love this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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That Voice Junior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 34 |
I like this poem of yours, makes good images Feast on thy lips As my mind slips Over and over Over you makes me think of this line and is a good start for a poem. Feast on thy lips, as my mind slips Over and over, over you Thoughts lingers, like my fingers Touching and touching, touching you TV |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
NO.. you can't go dipping your fingers into my mind..( laughing)... you'll mess things up in there and i have enough trouble keeping it straight as it is!!!! very nicely done as usual.. and I see the hint of sensual in this is not lost on anyone... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is softly sensual, sweet friend, I love the feel of this poem, yay, we all love you so much, it's finger-lickin' good! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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