Open Poetry #25 |
Eyes of a stranger |
Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
You stare at the face, You know it, you feel it, Somehow connected to your race, Yet you are unable to place it He returns your stare, flashing A chilling grin that scars the soul, The defenses of your mind start smashing, As the darkness within takes its toll Dare you look to the eyes of a stranger? Dare you face the secret that lies Under the skin, a concealed danger, That multiplies thousandfold, like horny flies You turn away, face blue, Your mind a vortex of pain, What is it that he wants to do? Why do you feel like life has been in vain? Impending mortality, creeps slowly, The fear of death swelling over, The light of the air, dims lowly, Your face as white, as the cliffs of Dover His pace increases and you flee Down alleys dark and roads quiet, Panting fast, at the impending misery And on the edge of the cliff, you can only try it His face smiles wider, he has you now, No escape from the peril within The eyes of a stranger, from which you did cow, And now the journey of death will begin The blade flashes by the moon, And you shriek a wailing scream, But it is too late, he strikes too soon, And your blood forms, a crimson stream He rushes into the black, snatching your purse, Leaving you, to die alone, And now your suffer death's curse, And the pain of life has forever grown Into a plain of hell that blemishes skin, Onto the path of silver light, you walk, You face down, the devil's taunts, ignore the sin, Instead through heaven's gates, you walk Placing on the halo, you begin your new way, A protector you are, save your sons, Guide them back to the path they stray, For to you, they are chosen ones You must feel no rage at the chosen fate, There is always a time that shall come, Young or old, it is a burden great, That is relieved, when your life is done So honour your soul suffered one, And remember to save those in danger, Forget, the dark deed that was done, And don't you dare, hunt the eyes of a stranger... [This message has been edited by Peter J Marcroft (02-26-2003 12:49 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I felt like I was watching a horror flick. Well done! Susan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
chilling |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Delightfully dark. I will have to pull a dark one out of storage |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
I am glad you people liked it, yes fear and horror are very powerful emotions in poetry |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the darkness. It is wonderful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Peter, this poem too sent a chill down my spine, I'd rather not implore the eyes of a stranger though I respect that they have their own obstacles to surmount and conditions so I wish them well and turn the other cheek! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee, I'm gonna have to sleep with the lights on tonight. |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
I'll be honest and say that I never meant to come out so powerfully dark, yet as always darkness seeps into my work. Glad you all enjoyed it, see you all on the forums [This message has been edited by Peter J Marcroft (02-26-2003 04:08 PM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
An intrigueingly dark write.....Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Peter, this is really good I loved it it got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
can I vote again? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so neat |
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