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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-02-25 10:36 PM

Wind swept in the concepts of alone
In but a few faint traces, often other places
Yet arbitrary, sweet raspberry,
Feelings bared to bone

Tanned and leathered rasps as frittered
Vivid brights and days left littered
Unprovoked by rains or strains,
A tan and tawny tone

Warmed securely breathing, coming in the leaving
Ever sacred, par and parry
Capillary, vain, contrary shines
The love we’ve known

Copyright Kkh 2/25/03

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-25 10:39 PM

This is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-02-25 10:57 PM

Warmed securely breathing, coming in the leaving

I love that thought TD~

Minister Joe
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

3 posted 2003-02-25 11:10 PM

Kathleen...

What a wonderful attention to language--and words... love your combinations.

The title I do believe is just perfect.

The rhythm here--is excellent as well.

Thank you very much for sharing this,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-02-25 11:16 PM

Wonderful sound to this, TD..as well as attitude.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-26 03:26 AM

gorgeous

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2003-02-26 03:43 AM

Pure pleasure to read. (Not surprising, smiling here)

Enjoyed greatly, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-02-26 02:26 PM

really good,
well put together, heart and soul

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-02-26 02:29 PM

(smiles) And if such a love matches this description, it can surmount anything and your golden heart is bound to forever flutter across the rooftops of the world with it! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-02-26 02:35 PM

Kathleen..what a treasure this is!!
Wonderful!...Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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