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Open Poetry #25

A tanka and a child

Streen
Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

0 posted 2003-02-25 08:28 PM

I once knew a child
who thought he knew a tanka
and as he drew it
back and forth (across the sand,)
I told him, "That's a Tonka."

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-02-25 08:38 PM

This is so sweet!! Love it. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2003-02-25 11:23 PM

A cute play with words...thanx!

Inclan

Minister Joe
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since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

3 posted 2003-02-26 12:01 PM

Cute little snapshot Streen, thank you.

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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4 posted 2003-02-26 12:07 PM

LOL! Nifty poem -- Turned the Tanka to your toy for it!

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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5 posted 2003-02-26 02:57 AM

cute

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-02-26 02:41 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, the things children say always bring a smile to my face, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Derek, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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