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...Oblivious....(first Tanka attempt)
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...Oblivious....(first Tanka attempt) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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~simple abundance blessings brushed aside in haste lives too rushed to care seasons gifting us for free nature's bounty gone unseen~ Chris Barker 2003 ~~~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good, Chris! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Chris. Tanka very much!  ~Hugs and love ya, Teed~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do you have any idea how proud I am of you? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sue - thankyou dear lady for commenting. Nancylee - lol. How's your pipes? lol. Thankyou dear sister of mine - hugs. Karilea - Ya mean I done good?  Yippee! My head was aching from all the studying I have done to-day. Thankyou so much. hugs! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey!! What's this doing down here? Upsadaisy! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I'm not gonna .....no I won't....no way....oh no...  ....I tried so hard...I feel like I am back in school!! lol..oh, it's fun anyway!! Thanks Teed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Chris, This is wonderful. From title, you carried the theme throughout. Really like this. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Pat! I really appreciate your kind comments. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I hope you realize that I will be expecting more of these from you. You have set a very high bar for yourself. Well done. INclan |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
INclan - oh, oh,....what have I gotten myself into?  This is my very first Tanka & I thankyou for enjoying it. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
passingshadows - I thankyou for reading and commenting. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Chris, your first attempt is incredible. Great job -- I loved every single word and combined there's a wonderful message. Hugs, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Chris, this is very good! Rf |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marti - thankyou so much for liking this first attempt at a Tanka. hugs! Robert - glad you enjoyed. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thankya for the tanka! You are one who truly appreciates the beauty of nature and its bounty---and you share your views so poetically. Have a wonderful day, Chris! Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Chris, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, you always make me smile with your appreciation of nature as you truly are a bumblebee and butterfly to all our hearts of friendship! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, swet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Linda - thankyou dear poetess. Noah sweet friend, thankyou. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou vandana! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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