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Tick-ta (Grace of the Sky)
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Tick-ta (Grace of the Sky) |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Tick-ta (Grace of the Sky) Tick-ta, Tick-ta, Alone in my room Listening to the...regular beats. The sky is covered By the black cloth Smoothly spreaded As a roof of the city. There must be two angels At each end of the sky Holding... the cloth Making waves- And the waves would be our clouds Waltzing across in beautiful grace. Each clouds has different shapes, Like the variety people in the ball. But all are imaginative reflection of thoughts. And being one of them, I shall not feel alone anymore. Just when I was in my happiest hour, A bird awake me in her whisper. I'm alone Again... In my room. (c)Feb 24, 2003 Eliza Simmons ~Every girl has a dream within. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (02-24-2003 10:35 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this one. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ Hoping that my comment and vote this morning on this one counted .... if not, I say again that I've not seen lovelier thoughts than these - 'There must be two angels At each end of the sky Holding... the cloth Making waves- And the waves would be our clouds Waltzing across in beautiful grace.' Voting ... and we'll let Ron decide if I already did or not~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Eliza, this is sooooooo beautifully heartaching, sweet friend, it may not feel like this for now but soon love will find your heart, I am sure of it and the ticking clocks will represent skipped heartbeats! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much, you have my vote! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks all for replying but I think I will withdrawl this one and saved it for latter run. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I tried to vote but couldn't. I know you know I like this one. Joyce |
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