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White Tanka |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Slender tracks in snow white hare listening in pause hawk wings silently sun hovers hidden this morn death comes swift in sound of scree |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, I think the trees are beauitful covered with snow. But, I sure hate having to get out in it. You tanka is perfect for the picture. [This message has been edited by SmartChick (02-25-2003 08:58 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning hip-sis!! Now you know how my mind has been trained to work, right? Someone had me searching for the hare in this picture for the last five minutes.  Beautiful tanka...love it! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The circle of life....presented in a snow white setting...beautifully done...(who would have thought of a hawk as a hare remover??) believe in what your heart feels... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent, except now I'm even colder!!!!  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Karilea. The trees are covered in marshmallow icing!  hugs, Chris"Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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