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Only moments.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Only moments… they flip by fast, and scurry by faster, these last few moments, as I examined a computer’s internal external computer digitalize the temps that had dipped from 12 to 9 to 7…. only moments now before zero, and the powers that think they be, said zero would be all… only moments will tell if zero will last… but with you, moments become lifetime, with numbers to increase… and if zero stays zero, then I will mentally add a 1, a 2, a 3, and more to the lone zero and my warmth will be found in your smile in my moment of imagine. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
those moments of imagine...sigh |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hey Sunshine....did I ever tell you that I believe you are genius in your writing?? Well, this one proves it!!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
morning oh frozen one... (chuckling) 4 here right now... and wind chill of course below the zero mark. you can watch it dip and you can hear what they say, but until the sun comes up and begins to warm.... it can always go lower. enjoyed this use of weather and metaphor... very nicely done. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
The temperatures are very low here too Karilea. And, with no heat, it is even colder. I will be so glad when spring gets here. You are indeed a wonderful writer. |
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