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Angels Don't Always Fly
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Angels Don't Always Fly |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Angels Don't always fly Sometimes, They flitter. Tickle hint Near Your ear. And, Wispy air Spins Round your hair. They giggle just below hearing. Gleeful Vibrations Delicately, Flit feather Your face. Just to let you know They are near. Hovering Mother hens. Their gossamer wings Touching you with Softest Swishes Soothing cares caress. Surrounding you In filmy fabric of Finest woven love And protection. They are always near. Ssshhhh... Be still. And you can Feel Them Flittering. . . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (02-25-2003 09:37 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
now my heart's a flitter-flutter this IS flying - I will utter this is perfect warm as light a magic soar of pure delight. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
this one has caused my senses to take flight, and enjoy every single thought that you so wonderfully shared here! What a great poem!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
oh yes, i feel my angel when the silver gulls just seem to float by, as i gaze out at the lovely jerseyshore |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (shhhhhhs to other angels) Shhhhh...now let's go around her quietly and play duck, duck, goose, yay! (flitters around you) Yay, goose! (giggles in delight) Oh Patricia, you are so very right, sweet friend, angels do flitter too, especially the cute cherubs, this is delightful, I absolutely love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat, this is exquisite! Absolutely exquisite!!! Magical, whimsical, and totally delightful! This "angel" bids you good morning as I flitter flutter away...tehe Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-25-2003 08:32 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Could have sworn I felt them this morning. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
So, that is who I have felt near me, sometimes. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes...I've felt their presence...flittering by my ear.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Grinning here....... Thanks to all of you for taking the time to read and reply. Linda - Awake in mid. of my night and read a poem about an angel falling, splat! Though totally different kind of angel than referenced here.... it did cause me to write this poem. And, I couldn't wait for you and Noah and couple others who are soooo into angels to read this. I knew what your reply would be like. Smiling...... This was written all in fun and meant to be whimsical... Thanks again to all of you, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (02-25-2003 11:14 AM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Pat, you have outdone yourself with this mystical, whimsical piece. I just love it. I always think I've been kissed by an angel when I feel a slight breeze on my cheek. Ssshhhh .... I am listening. Hugs, Marti  Dwelling on the negative simply |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pat, this is charming. Another one to share with my granddaughters... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Marti, And you were another of the people I thought of when writing this. Smiles and hugs, glad you liked.  Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love this! I'm not sure wether to feel calm and relaxed, or excited! these are my favorite lines: Delicately, Flit feather Your face. so sweet! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
YES! BRAVO! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
grin |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Pat..this is SO beautiful! A treasure indeed..a touch of whimsy.. Shhh...I think I hear them! ~Big hugs for this keeper~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
**Sigh** So soft and beautiful are your words! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A beauty, Pat! Ed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I love this. too. I know that angels are all around protecting us.....and to think of them flittering quietly by is so charming. I love that thought..... SShhhh.....I think I hear one now......  Heart Hugs to you from Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I thank God for these archived beauties~ Hoping they remain for all of time~ Pat, it is just such a pure pleasure to go back and find things I missed~ How very, very gentle are your poetic thoughts~ Sometimes, to know an angel up-close and personal ... is to know yourself very well~ God knows ... yes, He does~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pat~ Letting you know that this beautiful poetic thought stayed with me all through my MRI's today~ I felt the 'gossamer wings' of my Mother's Spirit gently flittering around me~ Thank you, thank you, thank you for the never-ending prayers of comfort~ You've definitely lifted the flagging spirits of this lady~ I pray that I can continue in your dear friendship ... to lift you ... to hold your hand in this caring we have come to know~ You do not waver ... and for that I appreciate you more than you could know~ Bless you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so precious! |
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