Heavenly ..................Tanka

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #25

Heavenly ..................Tanka

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2003-02-25 03:18 AM

lovely crescent moon
heavenly tranquility
holding both of us
as we gaze at sparkling stars
and into each other's eyes

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-02-25 03:50 AM

very warm

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-25 05:46 PM

Beautiful, again. I haven't tried to write any of these yet, I don't think...I love these little verses.

Hugs, Ethel

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

3 posted 2003-02-25 07:01 PM

Nice tanka,

lucky

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-25 07:03 PM

So beautiful. *sighs*

Cold hands means a warm heart

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-25 07:32 PM

Loved it!

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-02-25 07:40 PM

Cher, hiya! Good to see your name and face again---and read this heavenly poem! Beautiful!

Sending you a warm hug and happy smile!

Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-02-26 08:53 AM

Excellent...one of my favorites...James

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-02-26 09:52 AM

CKS - this is just lovely. I attempted my first Tanka yesterday, and it was so much fun...yet scarey..lol. Yours I am in awe of. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

9 posted 2003-02-26 10:25 AM

Nicely done!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-02-26 08:54 PM

(sigh) Oh Cheryl, this is so beautifully mesmerizing, sweet friend, this had me spellbound as your lovely words always reach to the heavens, Gid Bless You, may the moon always glow for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.