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The Blend of Me
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The Blend of Me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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how do you want it? straight up?or with twist, slice of lemon,or lyme, or will you kindly resist? cherry on top, do i dare to disguise? or just swoop down upon you, and starsweep your eyes? want to see the whole picture all in one solid shot? are you man enough for it, or will i soon be forgot? should i eggshell the walk? continue sweet talk, tow the line,softshoe dance, are you up for kinky romance? milky white clouds painted daises, yellow haze seeking castles built on faith, are you a stud, a little crazed? run with me barefoot without any care, knowing the risks, will you dare take this dare? but watch for the sleeper hold it just may come your way, when you think that youve lassoed me, the other side might come to play [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-25-2003 09:05 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, I liked this...the ending got me to giggling......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're definately a wild one Michele! great write! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kids, yes, dixiegirl, i am a wild and crazy girl  hard to find a man man enough to keep up |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
I would like to think this as an equivalent of a scherzo. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wild and free! That's the best way to be. Although, I am not wild, but, I am free. I really enjoyed this poem. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I wonder .... do you take the pains to feel each stroke or hit the "puree" button on the mixer! I guess it depends on the ingredients. Nice touch. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks, wild, unfortunately, not really free, churchill, did you call me a schitzo, who told u? yes, craig, it depends on the ingredients, and whose mixing it up with me |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
This is different and unusual for you but as always I liked it. You always have me thinking! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) This is so delightfully sensual, sweet friend, I love it, you always write with such fervor and sincerity! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
I said "scherzo" not "schitzo". :-| It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Always enjoy hearing a woman flirting and daring at the same time. Great word pictures. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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