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Dear "You"
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Dear "You" |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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Dear "You", This really is ridiculous. We are both acting like children. All I did was tell you to listen to me. Any other time I've gotten upset I have kept it all inside. Just this once I spoke my mind, and now I'll pay for it. You tell me that I need to get some balls, and stand up for myself. You treat me like a child and like I don't know anything. I'm sick of the crap! How do you think I got where I am. Were you there to hold my hand? I appreciate your friendship, and wish there could be more. But, I'll be damned if I give up all my pride. I've struggled many years to become who I am, and I like who I've become. Well, most of me anyway. I don't know where you get your impressions. You think that all women like bad boys. You think we like to be treated badly. Treat her bad and she'll come back beggin', right? I think that's what you do. Just take a look at what you're chasing. We both deserve to be happy, but this is not working out. Neither of us has what we want, and we're not getting closer are we? I missed you today. Feel free to say what you want, just say something please. Wishing this wasn't me, Me [This message has been edited by KristieSue (02-24-2003 09:12 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wishing this wasn't me... ~*~ Good! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmmm.. sometimes it seems we should all write dear you letters.. the end...says it all.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great writing! Eric |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome writing Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Sums up a lot of things I wished I said to some people! Great writing! Interesting! SMILE  <~~Like this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
.... Mostly enjoyed.. =/ Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great job... chris |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristie, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this truly is heartaching and I pray now you find the respect you deserve ever so much soon! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very well written. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
:-) Thanks |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a write! I enjoy you. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
thanks ohhhh shadowy one.... :-) HUGGLES |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We learn from time and experiences what we want or don't want...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You go girl!!! If it is you you're writing about. If not? You go, anyway!! I enjoyed this. It was interesting. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
LOL thanks James and Ethel. I had forgotten this was here. That was me in a tantrum. I had every right to be there...but that was me outspoken. Happens once every ten years or so LOL Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Very emotional write. ****************************************** Just take a look at what you're chasing ****************************************** Let's hope that idiot figues it out. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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