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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
That you are the mold maker, did with me, as you wish. You decided, a pot broken, a useless dish? Of what purpose, then this, my dismay? Unable to utilize, fabric of fortune. Nor, flaunt the folly of flag-waving my aura. Were it you all this time, be it so.... Yet, ever the question, please? I'll ask once again, Who then, ~am I?~ . . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Of what purpose, then this, my dismay? Pat, these lines struck me the most..it's a really lousy feeling to find that you care when your mind tells you you shouldn't... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hi Kaile, The title says much. I don't feel this way, personally....maybe, what seems like one hundred years ago, I did. But certainly don't now. Some of us are truly broken, spiritually, but, if we stay out of His way, God has a plan and purpose for our lives, so much better than any path we could have chosen. Thank you for taking the time to read and reply. Hugs. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching, I can relate... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I enjoyed the poem, as always..... as well as the reply....as always. You really are a very good writer, friend. I like the different forms you are using....  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Of what purpose, then this, my dismay? yes these words... this question in way a summation of the feeling.... nicely done... I enjoyed. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like this, I think all of us at a time must be broken before the Lord, we learn only then what it means to be dependant on Him, and boy is it humbling! Enjoyed, as always! Hugs and love,Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (02-24-2003 07:23 PM).] |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I admire your writing skills  ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Wonderful poem.. Nicly written! Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very well penned Pat... You have such a wonderful way with words. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Patricia, this is so very true, sweet friend, I think we must be seen as fragments before we can truly become greenware from God's pottery wheel, so we can understand our faults and overcome them with love and strength ever so true! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Pat, you are a very talented writer. I love the way you wrote this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pat~ I find your thoughtful pennings to contain such golden words of wisdom~ AGAIN, I am thankful that God put you in my circle~  'Some of us are truly broken, spiritually, but, if we stay out of His way, God has a plan and purpose for our lives, so much better than any path we could have chosen.' Your own response says so much about you~ And I have come to know that you are indeed the beautiful words you've written~ Bless you on your path dear poetess~ You have a gift of not only your poetry to share ... but a light to hold so that others may hopefully find their way to His Glory~ His *gifts* to you ... are to be shared~ *Huglets* from a true friend~  ~*Marge*~  Hi other people~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*giggles* I know ... aren't I an absolute brat~ Go figure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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