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Like a tree
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Ill stand here Tall, strong and proud Waiting quietly in the breeze Waiting for someone to notice me. Like a tree, they over look me They dont even care. Eyes glance straight passed me Not knowing what they missed One day ill be gone And people will cry They wonder why they didnt notice me They'll wonder why they didnt care. Like a tree Ill wait for you... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Wow...very good. I enjoyed this quite a lot! I hope to read more from you! Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
interesting, almost tom sawyer at his own funeral but much more dignified and serious. -majnu |
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