Open Poetry #25 |
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Focusing On My dreams |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown ![]() |
~ By Sue ~ It is only when I am still I start thinking of you My love for you was real As well as the pain inside too If my love for you had been fake It would not be so hard To just stop thinking about you And you would no longer be in my heart There was no pretending When I was there with you I gave all I could give There was nothing more I could do As I sit here in this house alone I wait for that one certain day When all of the pain I now feel Has just all gone away Until that special day I just keep myself so busy And focus on the dreams I have That mean so much to me 2-23-03 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You've got it right Sue... Focus on your own dreams now...it's your turn. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautifully written Sue. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Yes, you must focus on your heart and dreams first, as happiness begins with yourself then can spread to another when the time is right! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...those that belong in our dreams will fit themselves in...James |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I love the way you wrote this, even if it was sad. Sorry, I didn't see it before now...... ![]() Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting! keep healing! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sue, this is wonderful....I am so very glad to have read this one from you, and really truly enjoyed the positive ending. You're out of the shadows, and heading into the light!!!! Good to see you!!! ![]() Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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