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Will Ever the Twain Meet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Will ever the Twain Meet I stand the shoulders of my dreams. In search the secret of its reams The epitome of shadows roam The empty space beyond the dome They are two worlds that live inside. And only one can I abide They pass each other in the night And paradox within the light One throws shadows on the other One that gives and one that smothers One that beams in ecstasy And one that seems but prudery. Which is the true, which is the rue. How can I make a one of two? Where is the scale that weighs the source? How sets the sail to sail the course? There is one problem with the rhyme Do I really have the time? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
One throws shadows on the other One that gives and one that smothers One that beams in ecstasy And one that seems but prudery. Which is the true, which is the rue. How can I make a one of two? Where is the scale that weighs the source? How sets the sail to sail the course? There is one problem with the rhyme Do I really have the time? ==================================== You are the Shakespeare sonnet of my rhyme ... like Frost, Poe, and Twain ... your poetry shall remain long after "your time." *winkiewinkie*    oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Morning, Seymour It's good to see you this morning, and with a very delightfully wise poem. I love it, of course.....  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Sometimes you are a cone of cotton candy. I just want to eat you up. WWRS Ericc Thank you for the beautiful. garysgirl Thank you sweet and hugs back. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - lovely write this "snowed in" morning in Ontario, Canada. Where is my sister Enchantress with the tea? I've got the cinnamon toast. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Nancy must have over slept. LOL You know I had cinnamon toast this morning. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yes, you truly captivate the spirits of the great writers, and because they went between worlds is what made them valid and credible! (big hugggssssss) This is remarkable, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Here I am Sy!! Snowed in we are! You wouldn't believe it..almost up to my waist..but then, I'm short. ...and I do tend to exaggerate. Just sat down now to read.... And this gem was worth the wait. Sorry the tea is so late today...forgive me? ~Hugs & Snowball Smiles~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Very understanding, thank you for the read and reply. Nancy, There is nothing to forgive, & hugs. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
There is one problem with the rhyme Do I really have the time? yep you are right I enjoyed this little flight Thomas |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 beautiful as always Sey  Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thomas, Thanks for the read and reply. Charisma And thank you as always. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, So sorry I'm this late in answering, busy day, but have a little time now to simply say Janet Marie said it best. I so agree with her. Love your poetry, ever making me think, feel and ~believe~...... Thanks, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
.  .Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes Sy...you have lots of time...to rhyme.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Thank you so much, JM is really somethig. Connel  scorpio I hope your right. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Make the time! *S* So many things clamor for our attention... but we need to live, not merely exist. *S* And rhyme... especially yours... nourishes. *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I missed my Sunday elixir... I should have found this timely... as it is, you're making me feel better today! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you so much you are a dear. Sunshine, Whenever the time or day, making you feel better is my pleasure. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
He will be missed ARCTIC WIND |
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