Open Poetry #25 |
Slender Threads, Faith, and Time - a memoriam |
Sunshine
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Slender Threads, Faith, and Time I thought of you today on the glimmer of a thread backed up by time where pages leaf me to laughter and wisdom and life is balanced I thought of the disarray of life as the pendulum swung back, and forth, how we can go from gleam to dusty fingerprints and etchings of love can be as fragile as crystal or as brilliant as the faith one is born with or acquires I thought of time spent and times to come where I might hold all or nothing but memories In this hushed perusing of my belief, designed by a larger force, it becomes forged more solid than ever… of how, without knowing, you’ve touched me, in ways that I will be able to return to, through your writing your art your beliefs… and how much I look forward to more moments spent with you no matter how much time we have or don’t have… I thought of you today on the glimmer of a thread backed up by time where pages leaf me to laughter and wisdom and life is balanced because I will see you here and there on a glimmer in time with laughter by wisdom balanced. ~*~ Dedicated in the memory of Lyra Nesius [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-18-2003 09:35 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful writing...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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of how, without knowing, you’ve touched me, in ways that I will be able to return to, through your writing ================================= yes....indeed... thank you for this Kari. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
A very lovely and loving tribute. Altho' you wrote from your heart and not necessarily for our ears, we are buoyed by the love you show. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
beautiful tribute to Lyra Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
... Yes..thank you Karilea. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - This is such a sad, sad day. Lyra was such a strong yet gentle spirit. This is a wonderful write my friend. thankyou. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--It is hard for me to reply...just know how meaningful this is to me also. |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful...these tributes are so hard to read - each one makes me cry all over again. We have to take faith in that she is at peace and no longer in pain. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sun - what beauty in your words - goodness - this is one of your best - straight from the heart - much peace xxoo |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a beautiful tribute |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I know that Lyra appreciates your "Slender Threads,"... I surely do... Thank you, Karilea... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
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this is one of the most beautiful poems I have read.....thank you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very, very beautiful tribute, Karilea. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you Karilea for sharing Charisma |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you for these delicate thoughts, so soothing. The power to touch people that Lyra possesses, even still, certainly seems immortal. And I have always known that you possess it too. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful... I'm such an emotional wreck |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'm in too gloomy a mood to have read all the way through this Karilea but I know how beautiful and fitting a tribute this is to a dear friend from a dear friend. May your words find her and her thoughts find you |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
What can i say? Just i can feel the words, great great Write Shayne |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Karilea, I read this early this morning and became so overwhelmed with tears that I couldn't respond. Thank you for such a beautiful tribute to a lady we will miss terribly. I still cannot believe she is gone. Hugs to you, Marti |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes,this one of beautiful poems I have read |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx KJ, and she will always be with us through her writings. Beautifully said Lady Poet! |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Bittersweet beauty... wow, what a woman this Lyra must have been and still is. I feel the enormous love you had for her pouring through your sweet poem. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Moca |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karilea This was so very beautiful and your words touched my heart. I may not have known Lyra as well as most of you but I did know her to be a graceful and charming lady who continually encouraged me and many others. She will be so sadly missed. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Salt New Member
since 2003-03-19
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Nice theme and very clear contrasts and imagery... Peace |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all, poet friends... |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Sunshine../\..very well spoken/written; sings and sings../\..Spiros --------------------yes------- |
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QjQ Member Elite
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
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Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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