Open Poetry #25 |
I Would Die For You, My Angel |
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
This here is a repost because I wanted this one considered for publication in the upcoming passions book. ;-) ******************************* Love and Hate Day and Night Birth and Death Wrong and Right Faith and Hope I want to cry Peace and Joy I want to die White and Black Peace and War Better and Worse Rich and Poor Despair and loss I want to share. Who are you? I want to care. Heaven and Hell Mean and Nice Light and Darkness Fire and Ice Up and Down Hot and Cold Sun and Moon Young and old What is love? Do I really care? …Searching for something already there… For you I send a prayer. Late and early Snow and Rain Angels and Demons Pleasure and Pain How can I pray for you this night? For if I could, and if I might, For you I’d make it seem alright. There’s nothing in this heart for you, but, yes, I would still die for you. ...I would strip myself of this cruel mortal coil for thee.. You are an angel, flying high, Do not be fooled, You'll never die. I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice writing...James |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this aches fellow sufferer of human plague [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-23-2003 12:29 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) This is so hauntingly beautiful, sweet friend, even amidst all the darkness and shrill cries, there is innocence, faith, strength, in the wind beneath ones wings where love always finds a way! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have my most enthusiastic vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
certainly to be considered! got my vote! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Simplicity speaks volumes. Enjoyed. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed the yin-yang of this piece. Warm hugs, EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
EagleScorpion - consider my vote for the book for this writing. Back to the top... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm glad you've posted this one for the book, as I think it's one of your best. Yes, a vote for the EagleScorpion. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Really enjoyed this. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A poem chalk full of paradigms.....very cool!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
You've penned a very interesting, and enjoyable poem here. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
A repost this may be but one very worthy of the book to me. Dawn |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
EagleScorpion - I'm glad you posted this for the book. You have my vote... BC |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just breathe taking. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
This fits us Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
(justbleu- i think you mean PARADOXES!! comforting/terrifying poem, joseph. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
nice ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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