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Before The Moon Howls
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Before The Moon Howls |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Softly, hesitantly.. Each step taken into the unknown of what will become today...Treading gingerly ...through life... toward the darkness... at light’s edge... Still is the air of sound, void of life but for the gentle fall of a shimmering tear... Shuddering... each breath clouding, hanging, disappearing into the light of a street lamp...until the next labors and a heart races.. Alone, into the valley of fear, crossing the arid plain of desolate thoughts... Softly...lightly...as water fills the mirage of doubt before the moon howls... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where have you been? And why have you been gone so long? THIS... is pure Magnus... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly beautiful Barry... You have been missed here! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes,my friend,good to see you  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry--Sometimes dark places and the unknown are too intriguing to avoid. Good to see you, dear man! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Alone, into the valley of fear, crossing the arid plain of desolate thoughts... Yikes! I've been here before. Great write Magnus my friend. You've been missed. hugs. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- that perches in the soul.... -Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by Nightshade (03-02-2003 09:11 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Missed your writes, excellent and vivid piece as usual |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, we hav eall missed you soooooo much, dearest friend, we're all sooooo happy you're back, yay! (sigh) Through the darkness is where many more possibilities rest idle and only shedding light on the situation can unravel more mysteries, this is well-said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you do know how to make the reader long for more.......I didnt want this to end.....HUGSSSS Barry Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Missed you and soo glad to read some pure Magnus poetry...Captivating and electric  hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is so beautiful, stinning! I always know when I click on one of your poems I won't be disapointed, this is no exception. But where have you beeeeeeen?! whereever it is, don't go back! we want you to stay.. here! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Magnus - ahhh the gentle fall of a shimmering tear - burning of the midnight lamp at its darkest hour lovely xxoo |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Barry, I missed you, too! This is wonderful. I especially like: "Toward the darkness at light's edge" and... "Still is the air of sound, void of life" Very touched. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh my god! You stepped into my heart and mind and wrote what you saw and felt! This was so beautifully moving. Susan |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Softly, hesitantly Oh Barry your poetry is a soft voice and a gentle keep. I don't know what to say, this touches the lights edge and brings it around. Still is the air of sound, void of life but for the gentle fall of a shimmering tear... Oh me! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, I have missed you, too. I hope you're back to stay so we can read some more poetry like this that only you can write.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Magnus - yes, where for oh were you my friend... Nice to see you... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wondering where you've been... a very deep haunting beautiful write, as always! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Mag"nifico! "Mag"nificent! "Mag"ical!---melliflously "Mag"nus! Very warm hugs! EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ What a tenderly poignant write~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very pretty piece. Inspired many thoughts, like random drops into the sea. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry How lovely to be able to read your words again, I've really missed you and I'm sure others have too. I hope all is well in your life and welcome back. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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