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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-02-22 10:51 PM

clouds weep
of love's lament,
recycled tears
rain on empty branches,
wooden statues bathed in rain,
standing stoic,
is anyone listening?
brittle bones
cast in ice,
this too cold winter,
shivering beneath,
will they carry life again?
strings of heart
serenade this longing soul,
waiting anxiously,
one more moon
full in face,
to come and go,
count the days,
the kiss of spring
returning leaf by leaf,
paint by number,
fill the empty page,
fill me up,
with you
again

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-23-2003 11:49 AM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-22 10:56 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-02-22 11:01 PM

After reading this poem, the object of your affection will most likely "fill" you up again...and again...

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-02-22 11:03 PM

Vividly expressed the ache of missing...what wonder lies within the heart. Well done. ThisDiamond

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-02-22 11:09 PM

this aches..

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2003-02-23 12:14 PM

A longing worth the wait,
a thought hoping to hold.

Excellent work, sunshine!

Minister Joe
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

6 posted 2003-02-23 12:48 PM

I do like how you did tie the seasons of the heart--in with the natural seasons. Hope is there that come spring, the ice will melt and new discoveries will be made--and in the same way... ice-laden trees have their own beauty--tho be it, sharp and untouchable.

Thanks for the read,

--Matt

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2003-02-23 02:31 AM

that longing needs replenishment...you've said that well.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-02-23 03:59 AM

ah Michele....you're so good at the sad-beautiful writes...

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2003-02-23 04:01 PM

Very poingent.
Eric

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2003-02-23 08:32 PM

Very Nice inkedgoddess. With rain comes renewal. Hopefully you will get filled up again and again and soon......

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-02-23 08:33 PM

Awsome poem. Really liked it.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

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