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Let You Go.....
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Let You Go..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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You reached past the ache and held me in wishes from yesterday dumbfounded I wondered how it is that you knew how it could be that along some plane we remain connected then I laugh softly and tell myself ...it’s because I never let you go...... ~SEA~ |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
"You reached past the ache and held me in wishes from yesterday dumbfounded I wondered how it is that you knew how it could be that along some plane we remain connected then I laugh softly and tell myself ...it’s because I never let you go......" Inhaled every line! Lovely writing.  Sunkissed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - your words always filled with meaning... BC |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'that along some plane we remain connected then I laugh softly and tell myself ...it’s because I never let you go......' I love it when ya do that!  |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Oh! Very wonderful write. Very sweet indeed. Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, you really do put feelings into words..... sometimes I can't figure out if they're your personal feelings, or not, but that's what makes a really good writer. And that you certainly are, my friend.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You reached past the ache and held me in wishes from yesterday ========================= how it could be that along some plane we remain connected ==================== ...it’s because I never let you go...... =========================== tis the way of the moth... somethings never leave us... somethings never should ................... (why ask why)  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sea, some things are just understood. Why is this not submitted I am trying to find the vote button and there isn't one, DUH  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always enjoy reading you |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
My goodness.. I really liked this.. I can relate to it so well, and I'm sure most people can. We've all had trouble letting go of people, and although that person can reach out to you in kindness, that reminder of what was can still hurt. Thanks for sharing! Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is simply beautiful. Eric |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
susan~ this was a beautiful write, as always. and it's true, some things remain forever. some connections last forever... take care. hugs. amy ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may love always fold you in wings of faithfulness and be the wind beneath your own! (kiss on cheek) This is graceful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank youn for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautifully expressed ,I can relate almost although ocean apart , we remain connected heart to heart Hope |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful Sea i know this feeling well, have a friend who while we part we always meet up again and pick up where we left |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, you are very connected to your emotions and there is an emotional tug in this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
connections are sometime so hard to explain to those that are not part of them...but here, you at least let the reader glimpse a part of the feeling and a part of the reason connections can leave us with... nice work SEA... and glad to see you posting..always enjoy your words... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Love this Susan... Wonderful, with a fantastic ending! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
This is a good poem... But it seems as if Ive read it before.. =/ I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful as always Sea Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...some we can't wait to let go and some we never want to let go...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, this one raised the shivers... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I believe you told me once..you didn't think others were too interested in what you shared here.... I think I told you differently... I love it when I am right. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautiful as always! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
What a beautiful thought from a talented person for your words are always blessed. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
SEA, this is really nice always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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