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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-02-22 08:59 PM

Spending time in the wait
posessing too many clocks
to cast lonely unfulfilled sight upon

How can this be life
handprints on surfaces grasping
for substance that will hold me like you do

Eyes fallen into submission
caressing my own fingertips
the way you gather my many hearts

In statue standstill
no words pass your lips
but sail in my mind as you whisper with eyes

Balancing changing time
though not in my arms of warmth
my minds eye remembers moments treasured.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-22 10:00 PM

This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-23 02:00 AM

Gemma, I'm missing my Gary-baby, too. I miss him as soon as we have to leave each other.......

Loveya,

Ethel Mae....

Minister Joe
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

3 posted 2003-02-23 02:04 AM

The image of having too many clocks--very akin to not having a place to look where one not reminded of the time to pass--before the loved one can return... is a powerful image/feeling.

Thank you for sharing this piece,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

4 posted 2003-02-23 02:25 AM

OH MY GOSH....I really HAVE been away far too long.
This is incredibly written, beautifully formed and I could not find a single flaw.

OK there are my words of wisdom, now just simple reader's response, Shucks, I wish I wrote that....

It is very nice to meet you, and I love your words. This is truly beautiful.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-23 04:44 AM

I love the format! wonderful writing!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-02-23 04:00 PM

Oh wow...I love this!
Beautiful.
Eric

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-02-23 04:18 PM

Moments to treasure...as is this lovely poem!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-02-23 05:02 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Gemma, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I too know this missing feeling and how I long to stare into loves eyes for the first time in my life and actually hear the whisper tremble! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-23-2003 05:02 PM).]

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