Open Poetry #25 |
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Life As A Dolphin |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Jim Warren * * * * I swim beneath the ocean Amongst waves of deepest green This place is ever changing With so much beauty to be seen I travel beside large vessels As I guide them out to sea I am playful and intelligent Humans have befriended me And throughout the dead of night You'll hear the whales mournful cry As the moon shines like a beacon The stars punctuate the sky All too soon the night has ended As dawn brings a brand new light But for now I'll disappear Beneath the covers of the night I am in motion |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful Sue Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Nicely written. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is sooooooo cute and beautiful, sweet friend, I love dolphins so much just as I love fish and mermaids and whales! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
A wonderful piece!!! In ya go!! ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love dolphins and I enjoy this beautiful poem. Margherita |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Whenever I'm out in my boat I always see schools of dolphins. They're truly amazing, beautiful and graceful. Feeding them is always a lot of fun. ![]() The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
lovely, more lovely with the pic. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Your words flow as nicely as the ocean waves. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh Sue, this is a beautiful write. I love dolphins, although I have never seen one except on television. I would just be in heaven if I could touch one - they are so playful and sweet. The pic is awesome as well. This should be in the book! Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, as you can undoubtedly surmise by my icon, I love dolphins!---I knew there was something about you that I liked! tehe Warm nighttime hugs, Linda |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well done Sue! ![]() ![]() |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it... ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I love dolphins... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very pretty Sue..I too love dolphins. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, this is beautiful. I just love dolphins too! They are such a playful, loving creature. Huggles, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Sue, beautiful! Rf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling big |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i am just wondering why i never wrote about dolphins... good job here! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love dolphins and this beautiful tribute. voting. Maree ![]() |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Like the picture, you give us an intimate but unexpected viewpoint. |
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