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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-02-21 12:44 PM

In soft whispers,
I want to make love to you.
So especially slow,
that I touch every part
of your tenderness.

In caresses of my hearts desires,
wanting the touch the very core
of your inner feelings.
Treating you so divine,
that your heart melts
into me forever.

In saying words, that your tears
will love me with.
You will cuddle me,
nuzzling ever fiber within me
into a heavenly electrostatic shock
of being blessed by an angel.

I may never be a King.
But I will treat you
as my Princess of hearts.
For I just a pawn
in your embrace.

In satin we will find the heavens.
In silk the static electricity.
In chiffon the delicate textures.
And in your skin upon mine
pure ecstasy.

In the gentle moves I make
in the morning sun.
My fingers tracing your body
as if sculpturing paradise.
In every stroke, you are my canvas.
For in your exquisite beauty
creativity will never cease.
For I have been truly blessed
being with a living portrait
from the stars above.

So I will dream about tonight
when we will reinvent
what love is about.
By merging together
into a fire storm!

D.Lester Young 2/21/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (02-21-2003 12:46 PM).]

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-02-21 12:55 PM

Dave,

This has to be included in the small list of one of the most fantastic love poems I've read. So many touching lines and thoughts. This is so special.

My favorite stanza is the one starting with: "In satin......."

Truly beautiful love poetry at its finest. I also like "reinvent what love is about........"

So much in this, rereading I find more I didn't see and feel first time and it is simply a pleasure to reread it....

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

sigheyes
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since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

2 posted 2003-02-21 12:56 PM

sigh, beautiful!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-02-21 01:00 PM

(smiles) Oh David, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I just admire how you always write with such multi-faceted emotions and expressions, whether it's love, spirituality, philosophy, or society, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) This has my vote, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2003-02-21 04:51 PM

enjoyed the read.......beautiful penned!

Charisma

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2003-02-21 08:46 PM

A lot of lovely phasing in this poem which I really enjoyed.

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

6 posted 2003-02-21 09:13 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!! WONDERFUL!!

I may never be a King.
But I will treat you
as my Princess of hearts.
For I just a pawn
in your embrace.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-02-22 06:06 AM

A beautiful lesson of love ...
Margherita

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

8 posted 2003-02-22 10:54 AM

Oh THIS IS GREAT!!!!

Bridgette

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-02-22 11:28 AM

D.Lester Young
Some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2003-02-22 02:48 PM

sensuous ...

good work...

regards,
sudhir

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2003-03-20 12:16 PM

Oh, I like this... sensual and beautiful. *S*

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-03-20 10:36 PM

...sweet dreams!

Peace & Love,
EA

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-03-24 02:03 AM

Dave - my goodness - this is just THE best I have read combining passion and love - but then - what is passion without love?

Excellent good luck xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-03-24 03:06 AM

Dave, this is absolutely beautiful.
Very romantic and sensual.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-03-24 03:10 AM

nice

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

16 posted 2003-03-26 10:46 AM

BUMP....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

17 posted 2003-03-26 10:50 AM

This is a Fantastic write
I am big on romance and poetry
Great job
Thomas

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

18 posted 2003-03-26 09:40 PM

enjoyed

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

19 posted 2003-03-26 10:52 PM

A most romantic poem...beautifully and sensuously written..

believe in what your heart feels...

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