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Gathering Tears
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Gathering Tears |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
My tears gather as a storm. Unleashed...they flourish in the night. And every tear is a soul prayer gained release - a longing told across my cheeks. I cry into the night. I cry into the night...even as I dream your reaching hand, I cry - towards your touch. By dawn...my tears have dried. I wake...remembering the reaching hand that stilled the gathering storm. I wake and remember your touch greeting my every tear - as they fell...longing for the taste of your hand. And each tear Longs- For a single Tender Touch. I see your hand reaching. And my heart cries on. [This message has been edited by Ericc (02-15-2003 11:42 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Right here to be deeply touched by this wondrous creation. Crying together is a peak in a story of true love. You say it masterfully. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
storms of tears...I make some of my own too |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I cry into the night. I cry into the night...even as I dream your reaching hand, I cry - towards your touch" my goodness.....I love this part.... " I cry - towards your touch" especially this line.....so intense...  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is so beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, I know this feeling because I love to hold a loves hand for the first time and in my dreams she is always there but I always slip away! (wipes tears) This stings with yearning, sweet friend, this is sincerely lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So very tender and sweet.....very touching. I love it...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
How poignant and heartfelt is this poem. Loved it! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaaaaah... such incredible longing and beauty... bittersweet and beautiful. Thank you... Love, Moca |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
astounding |
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