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Open Poetry #25

In My MInd

Shlee
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 72
USA

0 posted 2003-02-18 04:50 PM

Too many memories
And so many thoughts
I don't know what to do
I feel so lost
I can't stop thinking
And I can't go to sleep
I don't want to follow my thoughts
I wish they would just shut off
Too mant memories
In too much detail
There are so many places
I wish not to return
So many thoughts
Memories in the making
I do not wish to find
Where they might lead
It is so, so cruel
This mind of mine
It can be for me a refuge
Yet often a prison without escape
I can try to run
But there's no where to hide
I hate to but I have to
Face them inside
There is always
Only one thing I can do
I run into God's arms
And ask Him to help and guide
He is my comfort and shelter
My ultimate refuge is in Him
He guides me through everything
He always pulls me through
I can not handle this alone
But I know He is with me
Too many memories
And so many thoughts

CD
Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 101

1 posted 2003-02-18 04:52 PM

I know the feeling - my heart's with you. Written well indeed

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-18 04:58 PM

I love this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Shlee
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 72
USA

3 posted 2003-02-18 09:36 PM

Thanks, CD

I'm very glad you enjoyed it, Loner

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

4 posted 2003-02-18 09:41 PM

great READ!!!!!!!!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-02 07:29 PM

thought-provoking and painful

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