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Lingering Storms
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Lingering Storms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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The rain wraps around the sound of silence broken by the cascade of rain as it slips into my soul washing away yesterdays pain. Constant is the pitter patter pitter patter on the window sills lulling me into memories of you when love was thought to be true until it all melts into dreams of the past, of the past and I sigh in relief as the sun breaks through where the lingering storms of you have remained way to long here in my heart. I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-21-2003 11:39 AM).] |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Rain... is a cleansing action of the heavens of the heart... Growth comes from rain... [This message has been edited by Elan (02-21-2003 10:51 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Donna, So delicate and soft, and yet offers a wonderful message of hope to those still caught up in lost love's grief. Liked the sunshine lines.... Very well written, enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, this is beautiful but so sad, sweet friend, I hope now the rainbow has come out after the storm and graced your skies with colors and prisms to the tears! (sigh) This is perfect for Reflections, I hope you submit this or one of your other gorgeous poems as I would surely vote for you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
The rain poured down and made me whole, Healing my heart and cleansing my soul... I love the feel, the smell, the taste, Precious raindrops on my face... No longer grey, my skies now blue Washed away are the memories I held of you... Enjoyed BlueEyes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Your screen name fits your writing better than anybody else's around here (except maybe wranx, he adds with a smile)..... Always gentle, and always with spirit. I look forward to your work. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I so admire your writing, Donna. This is lovely, my friend. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Keep your chin up sweetie... Very hearfelt write.... Hugs coming your way. ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Donna this is as soft and lovely as is your pen name. It fits you perfectly. This poem is gentle in every way. |
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