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It Dwells
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It Dwells |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It Dwells There’s nothing that can hide so well Without odor, without a smell And dwells within a mind of gray And keeps reality at stay. It slinks within an omni dark And rouses us in silent bark That plays upon a nights refrain And loosens dogs in symbols reign. It oozes through the bars of sleep And causes us to sigh and weep It hangs an embers burning glow Around the neck of what was so. And thought we turn and twist in fret It makes its way in sleep to let And causes rage within a seem And often makes us cry in dream. It makes you look your house of glass And wish you had an overpass. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It slinks within an omni dark And rouses us in silent bark That plays upon a nights refrain And loosens dogs in symbols reign. ======================================== That one verse alone is cooler than I have words for...the symbolism...the imagery...the word play ... the cadence ... and the oh so clever intend of the inspire.... and the closing couplet takes the cool even higher!!! You rock and it rolls me  Makes me *winkiewinkie* too. *L*    "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write here Sy! Love to start my days with you! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, through the air and the breeze may the song and spirit enthrall us all and spread like the perfume of lilacs! (big hugggssssss) Another lovely morning read, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You swell the dwell of bell.. and it rings, resoundly! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, dear friend, for another thoughtful rhyme of words. You are a delight, kind Sir.... Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A very very fine piece...save one thing, and it's likely me...I don't understand the second to last line. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
how do you come up with this stuff! you make it look easier than it should lol Enjoyed much! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'm sending Randy over to take you away. WWRS Nancy, Be right over for tea. Noah, Thank you my friend. Sunshine Love and hugs. Ethel, Hugs back dear girl. VAS It makes you look your house of glass It means, it makes you face yourself. Thank you for the read and reply. Alyssa, BECAUSE MOSTLY I LIVE IN DREAMS. Thank you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - wonderful write to ponder this morning. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you Chris for the read and comment. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
you're effectively a nurse you know seymour, doing the rounds on the poetry ward each morning, giving out your words, we're all addicted to your poetry.  like a drug! lol.i may not always reply to your poems, as sometimes i don't know how to reply to such wise, rich poetry. but know i'm always reading, learning and enjoying. i so needed this poem today, thanks mr.  lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxlearning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemma, A need is better then a weed. LOL |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Excellent! Excellent! This is one fine piece of poetry. Great atmosphere, and a nice closure at the end. well done. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ratleader LOL, I like your comments. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Four is enough, thank you. |
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