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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-20 08:26 AM

To know this fire

I turn as wood
gathered
in
your
arms.

You feed me to the flame...trusting in
the holiness of what burns -
and what remains
untouched
by
heat
or
hand.

To know this fire

I turn as wood...and meet the flame.

Fauxreal
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 38

1 posted 2003-02-20 08:39 AM

I like this- it reminds me of the passion and honesty of a new love - before the complications of time and events.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-02-20 08:40 AM

Another true example
of one
needing the other...

Thank you, Eric...

Please, don't stop....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-02-20 09:13 AM

(smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may the hearth of love always shine bright in your heart and burn with happiness! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgheous, sweet friend, we all love you sao much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-02-20 09:19 AM

Wow! I loved this!

Hot hugs (angel ones!)
EA

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-02-20 10:52 AM

Pure gold!

Enjoyed this,

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-02-20 12:39 PM

whew! hot!

like it!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-02-20 01:19 PM

Eric...These are truly beautiful...
Please think about submitting one or two for the book.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

GavinKidd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 44
NH

8 posted 2003-02-20 01:23 PM

This was great. Much enjoyed.

Kidd

Keep your plans secret for now.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2003-02-20 01:48 PM

You feed me to the flame...trusting in
the holiness of what burns -
and what remains
untouched
by
heat
or
hand.

To know this fire

I turn as wood...and meet the flame.

===================================
how very very cool is this poem....

intensity defined by succinctity.
I like your style poet sir.

you've penned a moth anthem here...and I a moth will be placing this in me mothy library...

moth to the flame

" ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ...
if it finds you worthy ... it then directs your course."

K.Gibran

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

10 posted 2003-02-21 05:35 PM

What wonderful magic you weave with words. How illuminating to the soul...

Beautiful...

Love,
Moca

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