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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-02-21 07:02 AM

Making Love Cry

Sometimes I think that I'm crazy for
wanting to break up with that girl.
She said we can work out our problems
and we should give it another whirl.
I feel pretty strong when she's far from me
but when were face to face I like everything I see.
Not sure if we can work this relationship out
to everyone's satisfaction but I'm willing to try.
I've never been the kind of man to get enjoyment
out of making love cry.

JamesLee
February20
2003

Darksoul
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 61

1 posted 2003-02-21 10:33 AM

"making love cry" That line is so cool

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-21 10:37 AM

Though this is sad, James, I still like it.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-02-21 02:48 PM

Thank you Darksoul and Garysgirl for responding...James

Shlee
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 72
USA

4 posted 2003-02-21 07:12 PM

Very interesting. Thought provoking.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-02-21 10:20 PM

(big hugggsssss) This is so very touching, sweet friend, I wish you the best of luck and hope all is well, let courage fill your veins, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

poohbear19
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 94
Colorado, USA

6 posted 2003-02-21 10:22 PM

GOOD JOB, NICE WRITE, HOPE EVERYTHING TURNS OUT RIGHT.

ANDREA

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

7 posted 2003-02-21 10:55 PM

I've never known anyone to make love cry. It always seems to be the other way around.

TRP
It's a great poem.

That Playa TL
Junior Member

since 2003-02-21

Posts 19
Tampa, FL

8 posted 2003-02-22 02:37 AM

Great poem

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

9 posted 2003-04-13 11:16 AM

It hurts to make love cry.....it can be quite agonizing!!! Good write!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-04-13 12:43 PM

James goodness - making love cry
that is an amazing line
we all seem to do that don't we?
Peace to you xxoo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-05-25 03:02 AM

Thank you shlee, Noah, Andrea, Icy, That Playa, Justbleu and littlewing for the nice responses...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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12 posted 2003-05-26 03:16 AM

lemme shake your hand

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