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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-02-20 11:23 PM



There once, upon a moment
That sifted through your fingers
And fell upon my thighs

In stirs of wiser words
Between my quivered knees
And drifts mount by surprise

Until an irritant between
These rice thin walls to bed
And sleepless syllables demise

There once, in sweet pea blooms
Between your fingers fond a pearl
And still, but fear falls lithe and dies

Copyright Kkh 2/20/03

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-20 11:25 PM


Beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-20 11:33 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, and may that pearl always be worn proudly on that destined finger, yay! (big hugggsssssss) I love the whimsically romantic feel of your poem, sweet friend, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-02-21 01:51 AM


Kathleen, this is so beautiful......

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

Fatman
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4 posted 2003-02-21 02:05 AM


Very beautiful.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-02-21 03:29 AM


wow! awesome!
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-02-21 04:13 PM




creative and unique, your style of weaving
these thoughts of love and its many complexities together

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7 posted 2003-02-21 07:08 PM


Done very nicely in your style...with such
beauty intertwined...  Well done TD..

regards2you
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8 posted 2003-02-21 07:57 PM




Yes, have to agree with everyone.
Beautiful!


Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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9 posted 2003-09-21 08:39 PM


                                    

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-01-29 08:50 PM


Very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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