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In Grains |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There once, upon a moment That sifted through your fingers And fell upon my thighs In stirs of wiser words Between my quivered knees And drifts mount by surprise Until an irritant between These rice thin walls to bed And sleepless syllables demise There once, in sweet pea blooms Between your fingers fond a pearl And still, but fear falls lithe and dies Copyright Kkh 2/20/03 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, and may that pearl always be worn proudly on that destined finger, yay! (big hugggsssssss) I love the whimsically romantic feel of your poem, sweet friend, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, this is so beautiful......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Fatman New Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 8 |
Very beautiful. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! awesome! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
creative and unique, your style of weaving these thoughts of love and its many complexities together |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Done very nicely in your style...with such beauty intertwined... Well done TD.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, have to agree with everyone. Beautiful! Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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