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When God Made You
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When God Made You |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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When God made you He had to create a new hue, for no where on earth did there exist another soul with such a lofty goal as the one you openly embrace... to love each being unconditionally... To gift each being the freedom to BE. To gift each Justice, Equality. There are many well-meaning souls steadfastly offering some or all of these rights equally to some, but not all, inscribing upon their hearts the names of the select few whom they would gift these powerful rights, sometimes basing the gifting upon national heritage, sometimes religion (or the lack therof), but always upon the absurd notion that God favors one sparrow more than the other. Yes, God had to create a brand new hue to color in the likes of you. May ripples of LOVE become waves of PEACE |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! Beautiful...and into th ebook with this one!  ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Kacy, this is so very true, it does seem that way, yet I know He has painted us all special colors, colors of freedom of speech and opinion, so we can speak and have our voices heard in hoping some odd ends can be fixed and we don't all fade into obscurity! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'but always upon the absurd notion that God favors one sparrow more than the other.' That may just be the best line you ever wrote! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you so much, Nancy! You popped in to reply while I was hastily adjusting the font size, to make it more readable. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you dear Noah. You always offer unconditional friendship and love to others. Duncan, can I hug you through the screen? I am really glad you liked that line. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely thoughts...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Simply beautiful. Eric |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Then...ya look at Toerag.....(even God can mess up...or, at least have a strange sense of humor) Lovely write gal... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When God made you He had to create a new hue, for no where on earth did there exist another soul with such a lofty goal as the one you openly embrace... to love each being unconditionally... To gift each being the freedom to BE. To gift each Justice, Equality. ========================================= my goodness...such a lovely poetic declaration. Someone inspired a new shade of love in your pen " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Excellent poem. Thank your for the reminder that each of us are unique and special, and that God never favors one sparrow above another. Blessings, El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Kacy.... God made each of us differently....and he loves all of his creation. Very good book submission, friend....  |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I agree!! A Gorgeous write! Into the book with ya! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I like this perspective...And I notice that you've been about color of late. Ed |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Love the ideas shared in this one, and hope it makes it into the book! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! Charisma |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful write! ARCTIC WIND |
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