Open Poetry #25 |
Fish |
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I’ve lived a life like the fish, Going where the ocean takes me What's it like to breathe, in a place so far below Sometimes the water's too thick, sometimes it's too cold to breathe It’s hard to be a fish, And still be yourself, Sometimes you’re caught in someone’s net, Or you are tossed by the waves. If you even survive, What's left isn't much I know there are plenty of fish in the ocean, But that doesn’t mean no one should care about me (hint: I'm not a fish so don't feel bad) the Wind is invisible. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Liz, is it really you? you're back?!! i've missed your little magical poems. you really do paint pictures with your words. But that doesn’t mean no one should care about me true, we care about you! although, if you WERE a fish, i'd have to pass on liking you so much, cos fish freak me out. i'll shut up now. nice to see u again friend! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, this is so very touching, sweet friend, I too don't like that saying "There are plenty of fish in the sea!" as can you imagine the grief the fish have to endure with the oil and coral reefs disappearing? (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write girl! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Don't you ever stop writing Wind!!! Neeraja |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You write with a wisdom beyond your years. Much enjoyed! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..though there are many fish... they are each in some ways unique... enjoyed... nicely done ( see... no outburst... I am trying to be good ) |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
great analogy, great poem. Sometimes it seems like your just caught in the tide of all thats going on.. and unnoticeable. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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